updates

README.org

@@ -1,40 +1,36 @@
-* NEXT Introduction to CodeQL 
-  The full CodeQL and GHAS integration is shown [[https://htmlpreview.github.io/?https://github.com/hohn/codeql-intro-csharp/blob/mh-wip/codeql-system.drawio.svg][here]].  This document is intended
-  to support CodeQL workshops and presentations; it focuses on the the section
-  labeled 'CodeQL Running Sequence', in grids C2 through E5.
+* Introduction to CodeQL 
+  The document [[./CodeQL-workshop-overview-only.pdf]] gives a very short overview
+  just to highlight the language capabilities.
 
+  This document is intended to support CodeQL workshops and presentations; it
+  focuses on the the section labeled 'CodeQL Running Sequence', in grids C2
+  through E5 of the full CodeQL and GHAS integration diagram shown [[https://htmlpreview.github.io/?https://github.com/hohn/codeql-intro-csharp/blob/mh-wip/codeql-system.drawio.svg][here]].  
   The section 'CodeQL query development sequence, using CI artifacts', in grids H0
   through J4, is a subset without database building.
 
-* TODO CodeQL overview
-  - /Users/hohn/local/codeql-dataflow-sql-injection/CodeQL-workshop-overview-only.pdf
-
   There are two identifyable tracks for codeql users: [[*CodeQL for Devops and Administrators][devops]] and [[*CodeQL for Query Writers][query writers]].
   The first one focuses on setup, deployment, and query selection; the second on
   query writing.  There is significant overlap; the [[*CodeQL CLI Setup][CodeQL CLI Setup]] is needed by
   both. 
 
-* TODO CodeQL CLI Setup
-  #+BEGIN_SRC text
+* CodeQL CLI Setup
+  After you have installed the CodeQL CLI proceed with setting up this repository:
+  #+BEGIN_SRC sh
+    # Clone repository
+    cd && mkdir -p work-gh && cd work-gh
+    git clone https://github.com/hohn/codeql-intro-csharp.git
+
+    # Initialize CodeQL
     cd ~/work-gh/codeql-intro-csharp
     codeql resolve  packs
     codeql pack install
   #+END_SRC
-  Using
-  #+BEGIN_SRC yaml
-    library: false
-    name: sample/csharp-sql-injection
-    version: 0.0.1
-    dependencies:
-      codeql/csharp-all: "*"
-  #+END_SRC
-  with
-  : codeql pack install
-  will install the packs matching this codeql version, then create
-  : codeql-pack.lock.yml
+
+  Using the file =qlpack.yml=, this will install the packs matching this codeql
+  version, then create =codeql-pack.lock.yml=
   which pins the version.
 
-* DONE Test Problem Setup
+* Setup Test Problems
 ** Hello World Sample
   #+BEGIN_SRC sh 
     # Install sdk
@@ -56,8 +52,7 @@
     ./bin/Debug/net9.0/HelloWorld 
 
   #+END_SRC
-
-** SQL Injection
+** SQL Injection Sample
   #+BEGIN_SRC sh 
     # Project Setup
     cd ~/work-gh/codeql-intro-csharp/
@@ -96,7 +91,7 @@
     # Parse error near line 2: no such table: users
   #+END_SRC
 
-* DONE SQL Injection Code Compilation and Sample Run
+* SQL Injection Code Sample Run
   #+BEGIN_SRC sh
     # All run in pwsh, typical prompt is
     # PS /Users/hohn/work-gh/codeql-intro-csharp> 
@@ -128,7 +123,7 @@
     
   #+END_SRC
 
-* NEXT Build CodeQL Database
+* Build CodeQL Database
    To get started, build the codeql database (adjust paths to your setup).  
 
    The bash version
@@ -208,7 +203,6 @@
     dotnet build codeql-intro-csharp.sln
   #+END_SRC
 
-* TODO CodeQL VS Code Setup
 * TODO CodeQL for Devops and Administrators
   - https://docs.github.com/en/code-security/codeql-cli/codeql-cli-manual
   - https://github.com/hohn/codeql-visual-guides/blob/master/codeql-system.drawio.pdf