diff --git a/cpp/ql/lib/semmle/code/cpp/security/InvalidPointerDereference/AllocationToInvalidPointer.qll b/cpp/ql/lib/semmle/code/cpp/security/InvalidPointerDereference/AllocationToInvalidPointer.qll
index 05cc53eb27e..0228f0c74ff 100644
--- a/cpp/ql/lib/semmle/code/cpp/security/InvalidPointerDereference/AllocationToInvalidPointer.qll
+++ b/cpp/ql/lib/semmle/code/cpp/security/InvalidPointerDereference/AllocationToInvalidPointer.qll
@@ -42,9 +42,9 @@ predicate hasSize(HeuristicAllocationExpr alloc, DataFlow::Node n, int state) {
  * ```
  * In this case, the sink pair identified by the product flow library (without any additional barriers)
  * would be `(p, n)` (where `n` is the `n` in `p[n]`), because there exists a pointer-arithmetic
- * instruction `pai` such that:
- * 1. The left-hand of `pai` flows from the allocation, and
- * 2. The right-hand of `pai` is non-strictly upper bounded by `n` (where `n` is the `n` in `p[n]`)
+ * instruction `pai = a + b` such that:
+ * 1. the allocation flows to `a`, and
+ * 2. `b <= n` where `n` is the `n` in `p[n]`
  * but because there's a strict comparison that compares `n` against the size of the allocation this
  * snippet is fine.
  */
@@ -147,8 +147,8 @@ private module InterestingPointerAddInstruction {
 }
 
 /**
- * A product-flow configuration for flow from an (allocation, size) pair to a
- * pointer-arithmetic operation that is non-strictly upper-bounded by `allocation + size`.
+ * A product-flow configuration for flow from an `(allocation, size)` pair to a
+ * pointer-arithmetic operation `pai` such that `pai <= allocation + size`.
  *
  * The goal of this query is to find patterns such as:
  * ```cpp
@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ private module Config implements ProductFlow::StateConfigSig {
 private module AllocToInvalidPointerFlow = ProductFlow::GlobalWithState<Config>;
 
 /**
- * Holds if `pai` is non-strictly upper bounded by `sink2 + delta` and `sink1` is the
+ * Holds if `pai` is non-strictly upper bounded by `sizeSink + delta` and `allocSink` is the
  * left operand of the pointer-arithmetic operation.
  *
  * For example in,
@@ -216,8 +216,8 @@ private module AllocToInvalidPointerFlow = ProductFlow::GlobalWithState<Config>;
  * ```
  * We will have:
  * - `pai` is `p + (size + 1)`,
- * - `sink1` is `p`
- * - `sink2` is `size`
+ * - `allocSink` is `p`
+ * - `sizeSink` is `size`
  * - `delta` is `1`.
  */
 pragma[nomagic]
@@ -237,9 +237,9 @@ private predicate pointerAddInstructionHasBounds0(
 }
 
 /**
- * Holds if `allocation` flows to `sink1` and `sink1` represents the left-hand
- * side of the pointer-arithmetic instruction `pai`, and the right-hand side of `pai`
- * is non-strictly upper bounded by the size of `alllocation` + `delta`.
+ * Holds if `allocation` flows to `allocSink` and `allocSink` represents the left operand
+ * of the pointer-arithmetic instruction `pai = a + b` (i.e., `allocSink = a`), and
+ * `b <= allocation + delta`.
  */
 pragma[nomagic]
 predicate pointerAddInstructionHasBounds(
diff --git a/cpp/ql/lib/semmle/code/cpp/security/InvalidPointerDereference/InvalidPointerToDereference.qll b/cpp/ql/lib/semmle/code/cpp/security/InvalidPointerDereference/InvalidPointerToDereference.qll
index 28a127d8d20..5945e533153 100644
--- a/cpp/ql/lib/semmle/code/cpp/security/InvalidPointerDereference/InvalidPointerToDereference.qll
+++ b/cpp/ql/lib/semmle/code/cpp/security/InvalidPointerDereference/InvalidPointerToDereference.qll
@@ -85,9 +85,8 @@ private module InvalidPointerToDerefConfig implements DataFlow::ConfigSig {
 private import DataFlow::Global<InvalidPointerToDerefConfig>
 
 /**
- * Holds if `source1` is dataflow node that represents an allocation that flows to the
- * left-hand side of the pointer-arithmetic `pai`, and `derefSource` is a dataflow node with
- * a pointer-value that is non-strictly upper bounded by `pai + delta`.
+ * Holds if `allocSource` is dataflow node that represents an allocation that flows to the
+ * left-hand side of the pointer-arithmetic `pai`, and `derefSource <= pai + derefSourcePaiDelta`.
  *
  * For example, if `pai` is a pointer-arithmetic operation `p + size` in an expression such
  * as `(p + size) + 1` and `derefSource` is the node representing `(p + size) + 1`. In this
@@ -114,8 +113,8 @@ private predicate invalidPointerToDerefSource(
 
 /**
  * Holds if `sink` is a sink for `InvalidPointerToDerefConfig` and `i` is a `StoreInstruction` that
- * writes to an address that non-strictly upper-bounds `sink`, or `i` is a `LoadInstruction` that
- * reads from an address that non-strictly upper-bounds `sink`.
+ * writes to an address `addr` such that `addr <= sink`, or `i` is a `LoadInstruction` that
+ * reads from an address `addr` such that `addr <= sink`.
  */
 pragma[inline]
 private predicate isInvalidPointerDerefSink(